Can I stay a little longer
Can yo become my comfort when things become difficult
Can you hold me close when everything is fallen apart in me
Can I become the person you are proud of
Can you love me like you are scared loosing of me
Can you take the risk of choosing me consistently
with the decision of choosing me
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saswati das (
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Here is the need for someone to be a pillar of strength a foundation to build upon. Nicely written.
thank you
You are welcome
A most interesting perspective in a cynical and sarcastic approach to the technical mechanical cold killing by missiles cast as obeying laws of traffic seen as safety measures so as not to hurt innocent bystanders. A sense of irony portrayed in this manner. Nicely done
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