your a man...,

David Hopkins

Your weaknesses are few because your strength is so abominable,
You are a man.
 
Your rage is a hairline trigger that will explode on the first hint of danger to your mate,
You're a man
 
When do you cry?
I don't see why you should, 
You are a man.
 
You might be wrong, 
Ha! 
But not for long, 
You are a man.
 
When you stand, your head is high and full of pride,
Your chest is out, and your arms are strong with power no one can deny
You are a man.
So...,
Stand strong when you walk.
so that you will be heard when you talk....
And when the time comes that you require FORCE ...,
so that you can be fierce, 
Remember that a Man is always in control of himself....
You are a man.
 
You are a Man who came from a Woman, so never forget her, as she will never forget you.
show her the respect that she deserves, as any man would.
YOU ARE A MAN!
 
Act like it!
 
Feb 9, 2017, 12:07 AM
 
 
D.W,Hopkins
 

 

  • Author: D.W.Hopkins (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 30th, 2025 18:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is a poem that is mostly meant for the eyes of the young men that are unaware of how strong they really are.., mostly as a warning so that they dont mess up they're future as a man.
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  • sorenbarrett

    A great message and should apply to all not just women, children, handicapped, old but all other men included. Nicely done

    • David Hopkins

      thank you so much....i do appreciate you reading my poetry, and more, your very welcome compliments

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome



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