Mysterious and alluring
A tall man in the corner
With a seducing smile
Shy and quiet
A young woman sits
Enjoying a drink
He strides over to her
Confident and calm
She's his type
She smiles when he talks
Nervous at first
But excited that he's into her
He takes her home
Coy and respectable
To his apartment
Timid and inexperienced
She doesn't know what to do
When he puts his hand on her
He watches her freeze
But bites her neck
And sucks her blood
She doesn't let out a scream
She doesn't push him away
She only sits still while she dies
She falls into his arms
Another easy one
He leaves her on the couch
And walks away satisfied.
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A metaphor? Taking advantage of someone unsuspecting whether as a vampire or a sexual vampire is equally bad. A most interesting write where horror becomes real.
In the Victorian era, it was common to write about vampires to express a story of exploitation, selfishness, and putting your desires above someone else's autonomy...considering my genre of writing I figured giving it a try wouldn't be a bad idea. Thank you for reading!
NingaGirl you are so right it was only more lately that it has taken on a more sexual nature and still carries this exploitation and desire issue as well. A most interesting write that I feel dose reflect well the issue of exploitation so nicely done. You are most welcome
That moment where she freezes before the bite…that image is chilling. It’s the stillness that makes the violence land even deeper. Powerful work, my dear 🥷 poet friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you! Thank you so much for reading as well!
Cor blimey .. I wasn't expecting that .. it kinda did what you said on the tin .. it just crept up on me ..
Yes, it's a bit of a shocker haha!
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