Day One
Day one, I made a plan.
Oops! it didn’t work.
I tried, I cried,
and thankfully, it worked…
or so I thought.
Day two, I prayed,
because that’s what I knew growing up.
Only thing… I lost faith.
Where am I without faith and hope?
I need to regain these,
so there will be one more day
for success.
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A poem about faith and its need. Well constructed it lays down the foundation then adds verse by verse to achieve the final message which is left inferred. More powerful that way
Thank you
You are most welcome
Petra, yes…I’ve been in that place of trying, crying, and reaching for faith. You caught that fragile tension between hope lost and hope still reaching. Powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
Thank you, hope all works well with you. It’s a struggle.
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