Sun

peto

The sun is out and burning all it's love into the air

Some girls are swapping summer clothes deciding what to wear

They giggle with excitement as they fix each other's hair 

The winter rain no longer blights their day

 

They leave together in a group 

As thick as thieves and granny's soup 

There's one who's not quite in the loop 

The packs adopted stray

 

Alas the sunshine could not last 

Dark clouds remind her of her past 

Withdrawing almost lightning fast 

Forgetting fun's ok

 

While watching this retreat he thought 

I can't allow this girl to rot

I have to give it all I've got

To sweep her feet away

 

As subtle as a baseball bat 

He asked if they could make a start 

She opened up her gentle heart 

And promised he could stay

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2025 06:38
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Warm and cute this poem tells of a budding romance. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings of spring and growth.

    • peto

      Many thanks soren
      Your words are always kind and inspiring
      Much appreciated

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Introverted Sage

        Poetic and great writing as always!

        • peto

          SAGE
          Thank you
          Lovely to see you
          Hope you brought your pen



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