A Father's Lesson on Trust
My father, with a knowing glance,
Once took my hand, serene and slow,
And planted seeds of circumstance,
A truth my younger self should know.
He said, "Of all that life may hold,
And all the worth that you might find,
Trust is a treasure, pure as gold,
The most important of its kind.
"But here's the caution, sharp and keen,
A truth you must perceive and hold:
Not every face you've ever seen,
Is worthy of that trust, you'll find.
For many walk with hidden aims,
Their promises like shifting sand,
They play their hollow, subtle games,
And fail to truly understand.
"They're going to let you down, my dear,
Disappoint you, leave you cold,
Their loyalties will often run,
And stories of betrayal unfold.
Each broken word, a heavy stone,
Will weigh upon your tender heart,
You'll often find yourself alone,
As cherished bonds just fall apart.
"So do not cling to fragile hope,
Nor chase the phantom of desire,
Along life's steep and rocky slope,
You'll find your own internal fire.
The best defense, the truest friend,
The only peace that won't betray,
Is found within, until the end,
To walk your own secure way."
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Good write, friendship. Good Dad.
A truly wonderful message set in splendid rhyme that carries the story forward. Loved the pacing of the words and the flow. Very nicely done self reliance and trust is the most secure.
My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love and caution feels steady and true. That line...“each broken word, a heavy stone”...I could fee its weight, showing how betrayal lingers heavy. Beautifully done…a lantern lit for the road ahead. 🌹💜🙏🐦⬛
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