In here
My comforter zone
I scream it all out
So I can wash them away
Looking to have a good day
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Author:
Anthony Hanible (
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Using the shower as a metaphor and symbolically washing away the unwanted elements of the day is a clever and most poetic manner of cleansing. Nicely said.
I love this! It's so relatable, nobody can see you cry if you have water streaming down your face. I love that it's so short yet still tells a whole story. This is really well done.
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