Lucky, If Only for an hour

Tooway

I’m so lucky.
They come once in a Blue,
but the pain is gone.

My head is Mine
it just makes you cry.
My Limbs feel fine.

I know I can’t…
but this feeling could
carry me two, three, fall.

Smirks.
“It’ll be over in an hour or two,”
breaking my will.
I know I have Been…
Forty Three:Eight:Twenty-five

Time this over;
my mind can’t control this.

  • Author: Tooway (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 4th, 2025 16:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: Love you all
  • Category: Reflection
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem sends me feelings of broken concentration, a feeling of falling and loss of control. Panicky



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