On life

NafisaSB

Life is like an onion

Layer after layer is peeled

And then, if you look deep

The inner core is revealed

 

Life is like a drum

To its music, we do march

Often, we may be beaten

But, look for the rainbow’s arch

 

Life is like a cloud

It keeps on sailing ahead

You can even watch its progress

While reclining on your bed

 

Life is an unopened treasure

We don’t know what it may bring

But, keep on seeking clues in it,

Do not to the past, cling

 

Life has many phases

Though we are granted, and live just one

So love, play, and laugh

And enjoy your day in the sun

  • Author: safina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2025 02:07
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem encompasses several thoughts but to each the onion comes back to mind each a layer of life. Nicely crafted

    • NafisaSB

      sorry for late response..as usual your comments make my day that much brighter - thanks
      have a good day

      • sorenbarrett

        You are always welcome

        • NafisaSB

          thank you so much
          have a good day

        • FΓ­na Elara πŸŒ™ Petra Patrice

          I love how this poem compares life to everyday objects and experiences. The imagery of onions, drums, clouds, and treasures makes the message relatable, and the uplifting tone encourages resilience and enjoying each moment.

          • NafisaSB

            glad you saw through the various images shared - thank you so much for your lovely feedback
            have a beautiful day

          • arqios

            In life's many phases we
            learn, grow, lose, find.

            • NafisaSB

              yes indeed - that is life
              let us hope it gives us all that we deserve, and more
              have a good day

              • arqios

                Amen! You too πŸ™πŸ»

                • NafisaSB

                  thank you so much

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window into how life unfolds...and the way you close it leaves the whole piece shining with joy. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬› Well done.

                  • NafisaSB

                    sorry for late response and thank you so much for your heartfelt comments. am honored.
                    God bless you and yours

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Excellent.

                    • NafisaSB

                      THANK YOU SO MUCH

                    • Soman Ragavan

                      Peeling onion makes your eyes run... As happens sometimes in life...

                      • NafisaSB

                        and if you are sensitive, as most poets tend to be, then the tears keep falling, though you learn to contain it privately

                        • Soman Ragavan

                          3.10.2025
                          Yes, though poets contain their sadness, they also write.
                          β€œOur sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.”
                          --P. B. Shelley (1792-1822)
                          The most impressive compositions of writers stem from sad thoughts.
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                          • NafisaSB

                            Good morning - agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments and the quote from Shelley is apt indeed -
                            have a beautiful productive weekend

                            • NafisaSB

                              wishing you a belated happy birthday...hope you had a great day; here's wishing you many more years of productive musing, and sharing on all forums - and also encapsulating it in more books...all the best always ! cheers

                              • Soman Ragavan

                                Thanks very much. I am happy to have found friends on this site. Even family don't bother to wish, by and large...

                                • NafisaSB

                                  My pleasure to wish you and all friends every time I know they have reasons to celebrate
                                  stay blessed



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