They say “gentle” before “man”
as if softness must be stapled
to power to make it palatable.
As if the fist, once gloved, is no longer a fist.
They say “strong” before “woman”
as if endurance must be embroidered
onto flesh to make it forgivable.
As if the cleft, once crowned, is no longer a cleft.
Adjectives are corsets-
the ligature of language,
cinching identity until it fits,
the silhouette of acceptability.
A strangulation ritual
masquerading as grammar.
Let the noun speak- naked.
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Aman 12 (
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Well worded this sends its message well in metaphor and allegory. Loved it a fave
thanks for the fave.
Most welcome and deserved
This poem challenges societal expectations around gender, language, and identity, using strong imagery and metaphor to make its point. Juxtaposition / Contrast “gentle man” vs. “strong woman” highlights societal double standards. Nicely written.
your thoughtful reflection on my poem is truly appreciated.
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