the mime of Paris,
why doesn't he speak to me?
I stare past his wall
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- Comment from author about the poem: another attempt at a senryu. I apologize for the lack of poetry lately, I'm busy and unfortunately too tired to care
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Comments3
A most lovely senryu that is far deeper than the surface. A fave
glad you think so, thanks
You are most welcome
Iโm glad you care enough to drop this banger
yes, haha, thank you
I really enjoyed this one!
thanks
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