He is a Star
He is a star the world tried to dim,
yet his light keeps shining, even brighter.
His voice rose in melody so stunning,
praising in church until accusations paused his path.
But he never stopped,
at home his prayers still rise,
a blessing well known in his community.
On the field, with football and basketball,
he grows into a champion.
In the classroom, he excelled,
attending some of the best schools,
his grades as brilliant as his spirit.
He is a star,
never letting the world dim his light.
He changes direction when he sees doubt,
shifts his location and goal
whenever they try to bring him down.
He carries many dreams and visions,
switching paths until he is finished,
all to avoid those who tried
to crush his shine.
A beautifully made creation from heaven,
he continues to rise, always shining.
He is a star the world tried to dim,
but could never put out.
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A sense of tribute to one that has focus and confidence in what they do. Lovely
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Most welcome
Yes, Petra…I’ve known people whose light keeps burning no matter the shadows thrown at them. Your words honor that spirit beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done!
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Dear, Fina,
A powerful portrayal of a powerful fellow; how a mother would hail her son as he matures into all that is good, honest and strong in the strength of faith, love and survival. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
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Well-versed and written. best wishes,
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