I'm starting to fade
Like an overwashed rag
The colors seeping from my pores
My skin will sag
Frayed at the edges, my fingers and toes
A single string, I begin to pull
Slowly until my hand is gone
Then my shoulder, chest, legs
Until I'm nothing but a pile of string on the floor
I used to be useful but not anymore
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I have felt that but unlike the rag I have not become more flexible only soft. A great metaphor and nicely written
A very vivid and imaginative comparison. The ancients used to compare life to a string and you do nicley. Great work.
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