the taste of blood
to cry metallic tears
and make a sword of iron.
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Author:
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- Published: September 9th, 2025 20:30
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Comments2
Clever word play in the title. The poem follows suit each line with an aspect. Nicely done
Haha, thank you for reading
You are most welcome
Love the word play! 🥷, beautifully done…blood, tears, sword...pain and power fused in three lines. It’s brutal and brilliant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A must fave!
Thank you!! I appreciate your read and comment!
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