(Haiku)
Dawn and dusk siblings
Born of different mothers
kiss the same father.
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Author:
Priya Tomar (
Offline) - Published: September 10th, 2025 07:56
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What a wonderful senryu is woven in this relationship between half sisters. Nicely written
Thank you so much.
You are most welcome
Interesting
Thanks !
Interesting poem. Nice
Thanks !
Soothing image of Rama and Sita !
Your haiku puzzles my gemini mind !
Image of Radha and Krishna !
Rama and Krishna both are the incarnations of Lord Vishnu . They all same in different forms . Rama is known for his morality and an ideal king who abondoned his wife Sita, a pure soul.
Thanks for always lovely words...
Thank you for the precision !
A Volume in so little words . Well Said.
Thank you so much.
Wonderful!
Thanks !
My relationship with my siblings is incredibly tragic, but it doesn't mean I cannot appreciate your beautiful work. Kudos. 🌹
Sorry to know about your siblings.
Thanks for the read, much appreciated
Wonderfully written this Senryu is, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much....
Very meaningful and deep thought, very good one...
Thank you for the most humble words...
Short but Deep meaning.....
Very good ...
Thank you so much.
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