Siblings (Haiku)

Priya Tomar

(Haiku)

Dawn and dusk siblings

Born of different mothers

kiss the same father.

                    

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  • sorenbarrett

    What a wonderful senryu is woven in this relationship between half sisters. Nicely written

    • Priya Tomar

      Thank you so much.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Demar Desu

        Interesting

      • Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice

        Interesting poem. Nice

      • Lorenz

        Soothing image of Rama and Sita !
        Your haiku puzzles my gemini mind !

        • Priya Tomar

          Image of Radha and Krishna !
          Rama and Krishna both are the incarnations of Lord Vishnu . They all same in different forms . Rama is known for his morality and an ideal king who abondoned his wife Sita, a pure soul.
          Thanks for always lovely words...

          • Lorenz

            Thank you for the precision !

          • Kevin Hulme

            A Volume in so little words . Well Said.

            • Priya Tomar

              Thank you so much.

            • Fränz Müller

              Wonderful!

            • Teddy.15

              My relationship with my siblings is incredibly tragic, but it doesn't mean I cannot appreciate your beautiful work. Kudos. 🌹

              • Priya Tomar

                Sorry to know about your siblings.
                Thanks for the read, much appreciated

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Wonderfully written this Senryu is, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                • Priya Tomar

                  Thank you so much....

                • Navjot Singh Nagra

                  Very meaningful and deep thought, very good one...

                  • Priya Tomar

                    Thank you for the most humble words...

                  • Anmol Sinha

                    Short but Deep meaning.....
                    Very good ...

                    • Priya Tomar

                      Thank you so much.



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