( Beauty )
Beautiful peacock
Dancing in the monsoon wind
But insects in beak
( dew drops )
In tender morning
Dew drops on barren bough
Like the pretty pearls.
( Rose )
A lovely pink rose
Like a new wedded bride
Smiling in green veil.
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Author:
Priya Tomar (
Offline) - Published: September 12th, 2025 10:53
- Category: Haiku
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Comments9
Three beautiful haikus each with their own merit and the last with thorns. Loved them all.
A stem bent with dew
kisses the lowest of all
but springs back anew
Your lovely haiku !
Thanks for appreciation.
You are most welcome and it is my pleasure
tender morning
a rose
dew drops
Yeah !
Thanks for reading...
3 for 1… thanks
Beautifully written
Thanks !
Priya, these haiku feel like little windows into stillness...the peacock in monsoon winds, dew like pearls, the rose smiling in her veil. Gentle, delicate, and quietly alive. A gift to read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much , Robert
This is a really pretty write. I like the words used and the way u used them to capture the imagery for the reader. Nice write.
Thanks a lot.
A really fine Haiku: especially the Rose.
Thank you .
You sprinkle a rich nature loving environment over us with your haikus. Thanks.
Thank you for your lovely words.
all three brief, to the point, and lovely..
keep up - you excel at haiku too
Thanks for encouragement.
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