Hell is a social body ,oozing and feverish
in a fit of dustbin spirit .
Hell is an old silent movie
that plays on a loop in my head .
Shouting morbid mantras
between the cotton-soft walls
of a padded room .
Hell is this unity in dispersion.
Mister Bean in the other's absent gaze.
I am making the buzz .
you're making the booze .
This is the story of a crazy bird
shivering with cold in paradise .
I am a nothing who is recognized.
Or a genius dancing on the moon ...
Sometimes, I wake up ,wondering :
'' What time is it in my dreamare ? ''
There is no arrivure or departal for hell !
Its a jungle for cubist painter ,
trampling on an impressionist garden !
" Are you Jane ? ''
- '' I am not Zorro ! ''
Lets read the scriptures :
In the beginning was the canvas .
Which gave birth to the web .
Which created the maze .
Who gave serpent ,the presence .
And so madness was born .
And madness says :
'' It's a funny chaos ,buddy !
Don't worry, be happy Buddha ! ''
My friend the doc' Freud
in his fed' attire ,prescribed me
the beast's QR code for life ,
to enable me to keep in touch
with all my differences .
'' That's $ 150 boy !
and good Halloween ! ''
Hell is pernicious .
It sticks you in grand'ma jam .
Turning you into a grown-up
with no answers ...
You're going to die
from a a shortage of consumption .
Jim Morrison takes your hand
to the river .
And hell tastes like eternal regrets ...
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lorenz (Pseudonym) (
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Nicely written Lorenz this surrealistic vision is portrayed in various symbols take the reader on a wild ride. Nice work
Thank you for understanding my mister Bean spectral disorder !
My pleasure Lorenz
The poem is like a window into a chaotic mind .
Deep philosophical !
Well woven ...
it's important to read the scriptures !
Yeah. It's important. I read Bhagvat Gita, Ramayana etc..
I meditate the verses of the great book of mad spirits !
Yes, I know...
But I heard that most people in west are atheist. Is it true?
Sacred is for sale !
Seriousness mocks !
Devil is social !
You described everything in brief.
Devil is social .....
they are celebrated.
You are a deeply spiritual person .
I am still a very young soul .I 've just start my life's journey !
a wise soul as well !
May your journey be beautiful !
Such a biting, theatrical poem, and yet astonishingly generous in its meanings. The boldness of composite images, a clear philosophical stance, emotional honesty. Remarkably vivid!
We're buzzing !
We're boozing !
And we finish grubbing up ourselves !
Nice to know I'm not alone in disappointment. No, I am not Tarzan. thought provoking, nicely done.
Maybe alone in appointment...
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