( Farewell )
Golden autumn leaves
bid farewell to their mothers
lass lost her senses.
( Softness )
O lovely sparrow
Had I soft feathers like you
then eagle traps her.
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Author:
Priya Tomar (
Offline) - Published: September 13th, 2025 11:02
- Category: Haiku
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Comments5
Autumn sparrows
Farewell
My senses lost
Farewell of a bride to her mother !
Thank you for reading...
Beautiful and so nature like. A lovely pair of haikus
Thank you so much, Soren.
You are most welcome
Beautiful haiku, Priya🕊️🙏🏻
Thanks .
🙏🏻welcome🙏🏻
perfect...and I do mean flawlessly perfect, haikus, my friend! Hands down. Beautiful!
Thank you , Robert.
Very imaginative and poetic. Short and sweet. A fave for sure. Nicdly done.
Many many thanks .
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