Scorched Bloom

FallingAwake2

Bending towards the rays, 

my wildflowers open,

and fruits sweetly ripen.

 

The light adorns my garden,

but beneath sun-baked soil,

roots have unraveled in tangles,

and are choking each other dead.

 

Petals release their hold,

submitting to a warm breeze–

their cumulative beauty dying.

 

Prolonged exposure,

in this stifling haze,

ignites my garden on fire.

 

Fueled by extended drought,

and failure to tend the weeds,

Flames gnaw through with fierceness

 

The radiant veil of light,

That once bathed me with glow,

Has now vaporized me into ash.

  • Author: FallingAwake2 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2025 18:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: mostly about addiction... about too much of a seemingly good thing can be detrimental
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A most wonderful metaphor very graphic in imagery and a story well woven



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