Time is like a frozen lake,
Water full, with heartache.
6 feet into icy depths,
Reflecting every crunch and step.
Take to me your very depth,
Were nature wept.
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Comments4
Sad yet beautiful it is a great metaphor with deep meaning couched in poetic images. A fave
Thanks again for reading
I love the metaphor. Time past is irretrievable, and holds fast all that has been for better or worse. Beautiful!
Thank you ninjagirl
Thank you for your interpretation.
Wow powerful but sad and beautifully written.
Thank you for reading.
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