an ember glides,
an ember glows,
the ember's gone.
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Author:
Jasper (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a symbol of time.
- Category: Reflection
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an ember glides,
an ember glows,
the ember's gone.
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Comments3
where did it go?
Should I include that in my poem? Where it goes to? I can't tell if you're suggesting that. But to answer your question, it goes away. Almost nowhere. Literally, though, it becomes something else (ash, I think).
A most interesting cube of words each line equal in words and meters. Well done.
Welcome to MPS, Jasper🕊️🙏🏻
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