Lost Young

Ria_1005

I look into the mirror’s face,

A window to a gentler place.

A dreamland where I’d been left untouched,

By sorrow’s hold and time’s disgrace.

 

I like the girl I see,

She looks and sounds like

She could actually be me.

She smiles a smile as free as could be.

 

And my heart hurts for her.

 

But in me I see the bone,

Of which only ashes remain now.

Little cracks that turn into fractures,

Silent stories no one has ever known.

 

Watch my shattered edges glisten,

As all your curses ricochet.

Fragments that shine unbidden,

Yet never fade away.

 

Deep down lies an epiphany,

That though broken, I am still enough.

To bear the weight unflinchingly,

And let my fractures sing of love.

 

 - Ria <3

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  • sorenbarrett

    I love the use of a mirror as a gentle dreamland. This poem in its dichotomy of that dreamland and reality builds the essence of the poem to me. Reflections in reality and mentally become the epiphany. A most lovely write and a fave

    • Ria_1005

      Thank you! That was the contrast I was hoping to capture, so it makes me really happy that it resonated. Thank you for the fave!

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Fränz Müller

        Nicely written.

        • Ria_1005

          Thanks a lot!

        • Cassie58

          A beautiful poem Ria, and I especially like that final line

          And let my fractures sing of love, most meaningful.

          • Ria_1005

            Thank you so much! Your praise means a lot to me!



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