๐๐ฆ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ๐ ๐ก๐๐ถ ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ฉ๐ฉ ๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐ค๐ฉ๐ข๐๐ช๐ฐ,
๐๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐ข๐ท๐ข ๐๐ฉ๐ฌ๐ด ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ค๐ฅ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข ๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ฏ๐ค๐ฏ๐ข๐ข๐ซ.
๐๐ฆ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฑ ๐ฑ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ ๐ฅ, ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฑ ๐ฑ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ก.
"๐๐ข ๐ฐ๐ข๐๐ฉ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข ๐ก๐ข๐๐ฉ"๐ฅ๐ต๐ซ,
๐๐ฆ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฑ ๐ฑ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ ๐ฅ, ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ถ ๐ฃ๐๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ๐ข๐ก, ๐๐ข๐๐ฒ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ฉ ๐ฐ๐ ๐ข๐ซ๐ข๐ฏ๐ถ, ๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ข โค๏ธ๐ฅ
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๐ฎ๐พโ๐โฏ๐น~ ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฆ๐พฬจ๐๐พฬจ
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Keyara S Trotman (
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A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
Thank you very much for reading my written piece and sharing your thoughts and insights etc. I really appreciate it. I MUST look into some of your work you have published.โจโจโจ๐ฅ๐๐ผ thank you ๐
You are most welcome, please do
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
The third word is โdayโ thank you for informing me, and thank you for your feedback.
No thank you, now Iโm going to reread it
Well on the second read it definitely feels erotic and I enjoy the poem.
Thank youuu for reading it, and I really appreciate you reading fr! And reread as much as youโd like. Your comments are taken in consideration.
I especially liked the last line. Great โ๏ธ. ๐
Thank you so much RSM! I appreciate your reading and comment, your insights are appreciated๐๐ผ๐ฅ. I def have to look at the line again. Poet Vibez ๐๐ป
This is tender and vivid at once, my friendโฆgleams, breeze, evergreen, all bound in the image of sealing the deal. A fleeting yet infinite moment, beautifully captured. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
Awwwww thank you very much โจโจโจ๐ฅ
Thank you very much for your feedback, and insights, very insightful and helpful ๐ Thabk you Poet
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