Do you remember...
under the mango tree
We built our paradise
In those few hours
Lived for many centuries.
Do you remember...
In that pink garden
The breeze kissed my locks
You burned with jealousy
Of that silky warmth.
Do you remember...
we named our teddies
Wish of crying mirror of you
And you whispered a little
image of my fair face.
Do you remember...
Beautiful wings of promises
Broken in wild cyclone
From my heart's island
Bleaching corals of love.
Do you know...
you went so far , isn't it?
you settled deep in me.
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Author:
Priya Tomar (
Offline) - Published: September 16th, 2025 11:54
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Innocently written eroticism. Gives the impression of hazy memories under the soft glow of sunlight under the trees.
Thank you so much.
Beautiful lines of love especially meaningful to me. I proposed to my wife in a garden under a mango tree. A most lovely write said so poetically
So lovely. So lucky you are....
Thanks for reading.
My pleasure
This is heartfelt, Priya…the mango tree, the garden, the cyclone, all bound by the ache of someone who settled too deep to leave. Beautiful and sorrowful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks for your kind words....
The poem explores themes of nostalgia, love, and the complexity of emotional connection. The speaker reminisces about intimate moments shared with a loved one, reflecting on both the joy and pain associated with those memories. The imagery of nature, childhood, and promises evokes a sense of longing for a paradise that has since been lost. The recurring question "Do you remember..." emphasizes the significance of shared experiences and the emotional weight they carry, while the final lines hint at a deep,
Thank you so much for your read and fav.
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