Not to bring this up because
Orichdee is cool, funny, and
Trustworthy, you see?
Going to tell you, kindly—
Everybody, please—
Really listen up here,
Because Orchi is
Ingenious in having two
Little cuties in his picture.
Sure, take a guess? 🤷♀️
Don’t you dare say it!
Another time and he’ll scream!
Mistakes happen, but damn it,
Now you’re just messing around!
Ignorance is one thing, but
These hamsters are done taking it! 😘
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
Tittu
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Tristan Robert Lange (
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- Comment from author about the poem: To the daftest delight this side of day, even into the night...MyPoeticSide’s own....this one is for you, Orchi...and yes, your cutie guinea pigs too! I hope they had a chuckle! 🤭🙃
- Category: Humor
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Lovely !
Thank you so much, my dear friend! 👑🐹🎭🙏
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won't mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
Soren, I’m glad it gave you a laugh…that’s all I could hope for with this one. And yes, it’s a playful little secret innit? 🤣 Thank you, my friend. 👑🐹🎭🙏
You are most welcome
So much fun 🤩
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend! It made me laugh to write it and if it makes others laugh to, then score! Thanks again, my friend! 👑🐹🎭🙏
For sure, mate 😃👍🏻
Be careful, they might be fido's dinner?
LOL! Too true! LOL! That Fido can be quite unpredictable! 🤣 Thank you for your time and engagement! 👑🐹🎭🙏
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of "Orichdee," portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
My friend, I’m grateful for your words…you’ve honored the playful spirit while also lifting the respect and care underneath. A lovely reflection, thank you. 👑🐹🎭🙏
Who?...Oh him!.. He's already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
Dave, haha, you always crack me up. I can just picture Orchi legging it for the hills only to come strolling back when the noise dies down. Classic! Grateful for your humor, my friend. 👑🐹🎭🙏
I get much fun out of having a good old to and fro (or should that be 'interacting'?) with Orchi from time to time, so I'm pretty sure (hope) he hasn't gone forever.....
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
Petra, I’m so glad you caught the playful and affectionate spirit of it. I wanted it to be a fun tribute that Orchi could smile at…especially since people always confuse the guinea pigs in his picture to be gerbils or hamsters. LOL! Your words mean a lot, my friend. 👑🐹🎭🙏
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
LOL! You're welcome! At least those that got the acrostic message now they are NOT GERBILS DAMN IT! 🤣 But yeah, I do envision you might be working on a new one soon! LOL!
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