the past might hurt for way too long
if you can’t let go
it’s still only you
the pain the memories will always remain
unless you change and move on
you shall be free
fastest way may not be healing
but drowning
deeper down in nowhere
to see a light you should move
away from all
that makes you drown
every obstacle you overtake
builds your new path
to you and your dream
it will never be easy
but at the end it’s only two
you die
or live
and even more
it’s only you
-
Author:
nikola (
Offline) - Published: September 17th, 2025 15:52
- Comment from author about the poem: (1) the past will hurt for a long time but It’s on you if you can’t let it go (2) the pain and memories will always stay but if you change you SHALL(it might still haunt you some day) be free (3) fastest way to heal will not be alcohol etc, which might feel good at the start, but later on just bring you even lower till you reach the nowhere and nothing (4) to see a change you should go away from all that reminds you of the past (5) every thing you get over, is a step closer to YOU and your dream every little step the right direction still counts at the end there is just two options - you live or die and it’s only you again, no one else knows your pain, all of your story and your past but you everybody can interpret it differently, read it differently and still feel it so be creative but this ⬆️ this is my story
- Category: Sad
- Views: 8
- Users favorite of this poem: nikola
Offline)
Comments2
This is a raw and powerful reflection on pain, resilience, and self-reliance. The message is clear: healing comes from moving forward, even when it’s hard, and ultimately, you are your own guide. Nicely written.
Thank you so much
Pain vs death and death is quicker. The question is whether quicker is better. A thought provoking write
Appreciate you
My pleasure
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.