Stuck in this current, waves drag me down, Each step ahead, something pulls me back- like chains dressed as doubt. Heartbeats echo, not now, while dreams slip through cracks. Yet light flickers ahead; one kick, I'll break free, Forward's not easy, but backward's just me.
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Author:
ROSHI (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: September 20th, 2025 06:40
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 19
Comments3
A poem of strife and difficulties that like swimming against the current is most difficult. Nicely worded, short and to the point.
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Feels like 21st century living, one step forward, ten steps back.
Really love the line "Backwards just me"
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