her hiccups sound like falling raindrops...

DeadRose


Notice of absence from DeadRose
Time travelling. Will be around sporadically.

"Your hiccups sound like falling raindrops..."

 

patter, light and soft sweet

small longing storms, memory repeat.

each sound pure joy. For the sky to fall,

gentle rhythm, soothing rumble small.

Weather stitched playful fluid stops,
her voice sings a song of drops. 

  • Author: -DR (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 21st, 2025 16:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: an odd complement I received.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Now that is an association that has never occurred to me. A most interesting poem that indeed does give the feel of a storm. Lovely

  • Katie Sherrill Barnett

    This is just a lovely piece of brevity. Well done!!



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