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To be one with one...

 

Is that complete?

 

You get all the trimmings, the gravy and the meat.

 

 

Now I contemplate - 

 

My attitude - 

 

And who I had become.

 

A freedom fighter, for a better way  - the sword  - look out - hear we come!

 

Now there's a villain in this story

 

(Did he see it?)

 

Weren't the two one flesh?

 

All for his glory?

 

I must confess.

 

You can see it on the gravy train, going round and round, I am not going to stop it.

 

It's life on a cloud...

 

Really, just a simple fix, two is always better than one.

 

Add a third increase the nation...

 

It's mathematical persuasion. 

 

That to love one's self is seldom noble 

 

But to deny your own flesh?

 

But who art thou, O great mountain?

 

 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 24th, 2025 08:52
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A most interesting poem that calls question to the issue of should one love oneself and I believe one should for if you don't I don't believe you can love any thing or any one else. Well written

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Reading this felt like a ride through both satire and scripture…the gravy train and the mountain side by side. Powerful and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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