Here— this tale, a gale, my Muse
composed; in rhythms of my soul— poems,
the swift-footed, from the wind, poured.
I tell of visions, of a Will beyond;
in ravishing verse, with tempo— fickle,
So bewitching, All by rapture struck.
Oasis, a grove, my Muse’s abode,
in a desert ere lone, apron-to— a barrow
whence the fire springs, a thrum of souls;
from the primal force, a soulful song,
Space is a kingdom-numb; female
and I king, uncontrolled, my soul’s flux;
transpiercing hums, a breath eternal.
Open—have the heart enthralled, take
this melody and beats flowing— brisk
warlike; the roaring drums— in this tale,
the throbbing of my heart, a dour sorrow—
to which God! may counterpoise and bless.
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Author:
Acheel (
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- Comment from author about the poem: HERMATIC TEMPO: 156 This is a polyrhythmic accentual tetrameter (varied feet). This section is calibrated in Digital-root numerology: Numerical Checksum & Symbolic Resonances Counts • Stanza 1: 6 lines / 40 words (Intellect, design, consciousness, construct) • Stanza 2: 7 lines / 46 words (the ALL, 4/6/10, this is the golden ratio in the harmonic rectangle) • Stanza 3: 5 lines / 33 words "Christ age" sacrifice. • Stanza 2: 7 lines, 46 words total. – 46 → 4+6 = 10 → 1 (origin/singularity). – So the stanza bridges 7 (divine prime) and 1 (origin). • Tempo 156: – 156= 1+5+6= 12, 12=1+2= 3. – 156 ÷ 3 (digital root) = 52. – 52 = number of weeks in a year (full cycle of time). – 52 → 5+2 = 7, which matches the 7 lines of stanza 2. • Stanza line counts: 6 / 7 / 5. – Sum = 18 → 1+8 = 9 (closed gate / completion). – Thus the stanza block encodes both closure (9) and motion (3). • Structural Summary: – Origin (1), Closure (9), Motion (3), Cycle (52→7) interlock. – Tempo ties the movement to the annual cycle. – West (Dawning Percussion) = ignition of the whole wheel of time.
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This poem encompasses numerology where 11 becomes a magical number, the one the indivisible number of God the three the trinity, seven a sacred and mystical number indicative of introspection nine the number of completion as you note. A most symbolic write that delves deep beyond the words. A fave
Salute my friend!, that third line in the first stanza is not balanced, have been working 2 days on it...
That happens and I have discarded stanzas and even poems for that reason
How do you find it now, is it improved?
The better the poetry the more that is discarded
I heard it in my head
O wow, how was the voice like?
Not my voice for sure, smooth
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