DAWNING PERCUSSION ᨑ WEST ᨑ

Acheel

Here— this tale, a gale, composed
my Muse; in rhythms of My soul—
from ewer, in swift foot, poured poems.
I tell of visions, of a Will beyond;
in ravishing verse, with tempo— fickle,
So bewitching, All rapture struck.

Oasis, a grove, my Muse’s abode,
in a desert vast, apron— a barrow
whence fire was lit-on, a spring spurts
from the primal force, a soulful song,
Space is a feminine kingdom stretched;
and I, a king uncontrolled, my soul’s influx
transpierced by a breath eternal.

Open—the heart enthralled, take
this melody and beats a flow— brisk
warlike; the roaring drums— in this tale,
the throbbing of my heart, a dour sorrow—
to which God! may counterpoise and bless.

 

  • Author: Acheel (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2025 01:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: HERMATIC TEMPO: 156 Accentual Tetrameter with substitutions. This section is calibrated in Digital-root numerology: Numerical Checksum & Symbolic Resonances Counts • Stanza 1: 6 lines / 40 words • Stanza 2: 7 lines / 46 words • Stanza 3: 5 lines / 33 words • Total: 18 lines / 119 words → 1+1+9 = 11 (Destiny threshold) 4 is order, consciousness, construct. • Stanza 2: 7 lines, 46 words total. – Average ≈ 6.57 words/line (between 6 and 7). – 46 → 4+6 = 10 → 1 (origin/singularity). – So the stanza bridges 7 (divine prime) and 1 (origin). • Tempo 156: – 156= 1+5+6= 12, 12=1+2= 3. – 156 ÷ 3 (digital root) = 52. – 52 = number of weeks in a year (full cycle of time). – 52 → 5+2 = 7, which matches the 7 lines of stanza 2. • Stanza line counts: 6 / 7 / 5. – Sum = 18 → 1+8 = 9 (closed gate / completion). – Thus the stanza block encodes both closure (9) and motion (3). • Structural Summary: – Origin (1), Closure (9), Motion (3), Cycle (52→7) interlock. – Tempo ties the movement to the annual cycle. – West (Dawning Percussion) = ignition of the whole wheel of time.
  • Category: Spiritual
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