The Sun

Favour Rubyson Kharnaior



As I walk around on the green grass ground
The sun shone down on the lady in a light brown gown
She bowed with a “Hello”
Her voice pierced like a love arrow
The darkness in her eyes
I see a beautiful soul

Oh, Hello!
Come and let's delve deep with me into the gloomy exploring galaxy
Throughout the journey I sense peace, love, and purity
Is she worth more than rubies?
Yes, she is the virtuous lady
In her only I see a modesty

Dry in the valley
She came to shower my soul and bloom a lily
Bright like a tulip
Lord, you open my eyes she is my missing rib
So I'll get down on one knee
While she turns around to the beat of my heartbeat
Will you marry me?

From the dark you approach like dawn
You blend with me as one
We are shining brightly like the sun
Till death do us part
I vow you will be my favorite heart in the eyes of the one who made the sun
From now on we're no longer two but forever one

  • Author: FAVOR (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 4th, 2025 03:04
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 3
  • Users favorite of this poem: Paul Bell
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  • Paul Bell

    Fantastic write. To get that one person who makes your life perfect is all one can ask for.
    People like that never die, they become eternal.

    • Favour Rubyson Kharnaior

      Thank you. Your words are beautiful. Some connections truly feel eternal, as if they were never meant to end.

    • sorenbarrett

      A poem of love felt, declared and lived. Nicely spoken in poetic form

      • Favour Rubyson Kharnaior

        Thank you very much for your thoughtful words. I’m glad the emotion resonated with you.

        • sorenbarrett

          You are most welcome



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