Prompt~ Think of a song that captures a memorable time in your life. Attach a recording of yourself humming it.
๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ข๐จ๐ซ๐ก, "๐ฌ๐ฃ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ."๐
๐๐ณ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฐ๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ซ, ๐๐ฉ๐ฒ๐ซ๐ฑ๐ข๐ก ๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฑ๐ฅ.
๐๐ณ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ ๐ข ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข๐ฉ๐ถ ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ข'๐ฐ ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ๐๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฐ ๐๐๐ ๐จ ๐ง๐ฌ๐ถ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ฉ ๐ช๐ฌ๐ช๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฐ โค๏ธ๐ฅ
๐๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ฑ๐ซ๐ฌ๐ช๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฑ, ๐ถ๐ฌ๐ฒ ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐ซ'๐ฑ ๐๐ฉ๐ด๐๐ถ๐ฐ, ๐ถ๐ข๐ฑ ๐ถ๐ฌ๐ฒ ๐๐ฏ๐ข ๐ด๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ถ ๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ข๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ถ๐ข๐ฑ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฐ.
"๐๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฐ ๐๐ซ๐ก ๐ผ๐ฒ๐ข๐ข๐ซ๐ฐ" ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ ๐ข ๐๐ฑ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ฏ๐ฑ ๐๐ฅ ๐+.
๐๐ฒ๐ช๐ญ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฐ ๐๐ซ๐ก ๐ ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ข๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ญ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐๐ฑ ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ข ๐ก๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฅ ๐๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ๐ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ฃ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฑ ๐ฑ๐ฌ ๐ถ๐ฌ๐ฒ. ๐ (๐ฒ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ข๐ฏ๐ช๐ฌ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
ℜ๐๐ฆ๐ซ๐ถ ๐ก๐๐ถ๐ฐ ℑ'๐ช ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ข ๐ฉ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ค๐ฐ ๐ฃ๐ฌ๐ฏ.
๐๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฑ๐ฅ ๐ฌ๐ฏ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ข, "๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ก๐ฐ ๐ฌ๐ฏ ๐ฑ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ฐ"
๐๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ด๐๐ถ ๐ฆ๐ฑ ๐ค๐ฌ๐ข๐ฐ ๐ฑ๐ข๐ฉ๐ฉ ๐ ๐ฑ๐๐ฉ๐ข.... ๐ ๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฑ ๐ฑ๐ฌ ๐ถ๐ฌ๐ฒ ๐๐ถ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข ๐ฃ๐๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ฉ๐ถ ๐ฃ๐๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ถ ๐ฌ๐ก๐ก ๐ณ๐ฐ. ๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ซ ๐ญ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฐ.
๐๐๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ฉ๐ถ ๐ฃ๐๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ถ ๐ฌ๐ก๐ก ๐ญ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฐ ๐ฑ๐ข๐ฉ๐ฉ ๐ฑ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ฐ ๐ฌ๐ฃ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ ๐๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ข ๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ก ๐ฆ๐ซ ๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ก.
๐๐ฌ๐ ๐ฒ๐ฐ. ๐๐ฌ๐ ๐ฒ๐ฐ ๐ฌ๐ซ ๐.๐.๐. โค๏ธ๐ฅ๐บ๐ต๐ซ๐
๐.๐.๐.๐.๐.ℜ ๐ฅ๐
๐ ๐ข๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ข๐ณ๐ข ๐ช๐ข... ℑ ๐ซ๐ข๐ข๐ก ๐ถ๐ฌ๐ฒ ๐ฅน
๐ฅ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฑ ๐ฐ๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ ๐ด๐ข ๐ฑ๐ฌ๐๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฑ๐ฌ ๐
๐๐ฐ๐ช๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ ๐ฅ
๐ต๐ซ๐ต๐ซ๐ต๐ซ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ง๐ฌ๐
๐ณ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
~ ๐ฎ๐พโ๐๐พ๐โ โด๐ป๐ป ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฆ๐พฬจ๐๐พฬจ
โ โโด๐ ๐๐ ๐ป๐พ๐๐๐ ๐โฏ๐๐ทโด๐ถ๐๐น ๐ท๐ถ๐ธ๐... โด๐๐พโ๐พ๐๐ถ๐๐๐ โด๐๐พโ๐พ๐๐ถ๐ ๐ฅ
๐ป๐ฎ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฆ๐พฬจ๐๐พฬจ๐
๐๐ผ
๊จโถ๏ธ∞๏ธ๏ธ
~ โฌโฏ๐โด๐ ๐๐๐พ๐โฏ ๐โด๐๐ ๐ป๐ถ๐ ๐ ๐๐ถ๐โฏ๐.
"๐โด๐โด" ~ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข ๐ด๐ข๐ข๐จ๐ข๐ซ๐ก
๐ฎ๐พโ๐โฏ๐น ~ "๐ฐ๐๐๐โด๐๐"
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Author:
Keyara S Trotman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: So for this here written piece I've categorized it as haiku. I would like to know whether this is placed in the correct category... Should it be placed for over 18 years old I will make changes ๐โค๏ธโ๐ฅโจ๐ฅ, thanks in advance Iโd much appreciate yaโll feedback.
- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments2
Not sure what part was a haiku but a beautiful message it was. Nicely done
Thank you my dearest Soren. I do appreciate your input โจ๐ฅ, there is so much categories to choose from, Iโd definitely take your word for it on this one ๐
Kiki, this piece beats like a mixtape of memoryโsong, soul, and spark colliding. Not a haiku but a heartbeat. A haikuโs more of a quiet moment in motionโthree short lines, usually around 5, 7, and 5 syllablesโcapturing one clear image or feeling. Yours flows freer, like a melody spilling past the frame. i wouldnโt rate this 18+โฆitโs all heart and creative pulse. Keep that originality glowing, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
My dearest Tristan, thank youuuu for your read and comment, your words are too sweet, and definitely worth reading. Every word is harmonic just like the way you wrote and took the time to write this out for me, definitely appreciated and needed ๐คดโจ๐ฅ๐๐ผ
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