I'm chasing it really hard,
I even think I have good running shoes on.
I keep trying, with new strategies and everything,
But I just can't seem to catch a win.
Every time I miss I feel my feet hurt,
And my tears threaten to fall.
But I keep trying,
Because if I don't, he'll outrun me for sure!
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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- Comment from author about the poem: One day I'll get him!...or I'll never get him, I'm just not fast enough.
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Lol! i totally relate my dear 🥷🪶 friend! Lately especially! That said I just did catch a win. I thought of you yesterday and here you are today!
Manifestation? 🤷♂️🤣 Great to read you! Hope all is well! Great job on this my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Ha, ha! Perhaps you summoned me. I'm glad you caught a win!
LOL! Perhaps I did! 🤣
Never chase a man let him chase you. A fun but really good write. Very nicely done NinjaGirl
Don't worry, it's not about men this time! 😀 Thanks for reading!
You are most welcome
The poem revolves around the struggle to achieve success or "catch a win." It emphasizes perseverance in the face of challenges and setbacks, highlighting the emotional toll that this pursuit can take on an individual.
Mostly--I don't know if I "highlight the emotional toll" very well!
Who???
Good to see you back, NG.😊👍
I'd say it's a "what" question! Thanks!
Tryin to be enigmatic? Last time I looked there was a 'he' in there - personifying wot?
I've been personifying a lot of things lately; sorry for the confusion! Almost everything I own is now a "he." So the win I'm trying to catch, is indeed now a "he" too.
So long as YOU know what you are doing☺️ Have a good life....
Me and all my "he"s will!
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