Father
You are closer to me
Also the moon that you
Made that shines in
The you made
Is also closer to me
Also the moon light
Is shining on the water
I already walked
By the lake
Ontario this evening
And of course it was cooler
By the lake
This evening
Because we are having
A warm Summer night
That takes our breath away
We know that nobody else
Does it better than God
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A beautiful message and vision painted in this short poem. Well done
A beautiful poem, the poem reflects on the presence of the father figure in the speaker's life, drawing parallels between the father’s influence and the natural beauty of the world, particularly the moon and its light.
A very spiritual write of how he feels his Father is always close and guiding him, well written
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