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Wishing you all a fantastic Halloween, Guy Fawkes,
Christmas and Happy New Year..
Wishing you all a fantastic Halloween, Guy Fawkes,
Christmas and Happy New Year..
Milky Way.
Daisy and Jill, we're looking for the planet Marathon.
They got to the planet Mars and just carried on.
Then they turned left when they got to the planet Twix.
Daisy then said I think I have had enough of this.
No Daisy, we have got to carry on Daisy heard Jill say.
I know for certain it's somewhere in the Milky Way.
Tobani August 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of fun for the weekend, Have a wonderful one.
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Fun read and you are so write that there are a lot of cosmic terms in candy bars. Well done my friend
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Most welcome
Most welcome reopening and a true experience of fun in a while!🕊️🙏🏻
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Most welcome 🕊️🙏🏻
Superb work, My friend.
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Seems a Marathon bar is now a little elusive.... though deep in Prof Google's entrails is a murmur of a revival....
Great fun Tobani.
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Good fun write Tobani.
Andy
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Sweet .. and have a FAB weekend yourself too Tobani 😎👍
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Tobani, this is delightful...sci-fi whimsy with a wink. You’ve blended humor and charm like planets in orbit, all wrapped in poetic candy. Have a great weekend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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enjoyed it, as much as the chocolates i enjoy as dessert....lol
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