Be ware of the owls that keep up with you
Your night your dreams and the other's in you
When the day breaks they take a break
While lying down they hush you to sway
Don't know where from but they hum me to play
Embrace me hug me when I get lost in pray
Where from where go I don't know what to say
But they have kept me hanging to my life as a clay
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They say owls are omens of death but I feel akin with them and have sat at my back yard table calling them and sitting with three of them around me at the table and another two on my roof. Love those noble beasts. A good poem that I related to
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An interesting write, some owls are guardian's of the night or omens of death, so having these in a nightmare could be a good or bad thing, depending on your view, enjoyed the read
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An interesting read. I find myself asking what do the owls symbolize. You can break it down for me if you want. I thouroughly enjoyed the read.
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As for the owls it's metaphoric to any thing you can relate to ..a thought a chaos a thing somebody said.. a turmoil that keeps you up at night and makes you work in the noon maybe life its self is the answer ..
I love it!
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beautiful............
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the turmoil within you, the mention of the night owl keeping in sync with your thoughts - all this has been beautifully laid down...enjoyed the read
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