Apartment 5

Abdullah123

Last night, I looked outside the window 
from apartment 5. 
I took in the smell of moonlight: 
dried up husks; rainy dew; 
cardamom? 

I heard footsteps-
the honks of traffic lights. 
Red. Green. 
Clattering in the kitchen-
the bed was empty.
I was here. No wife.

The air grew cold: it was summer. 
I bit my nails, 
the footsteps 
grow louder, 
despite the honks. 
I closed 
the window.

She came from behind, 
the smell of blood. 
I screamed, but laughter: 
she handed me a cup of tea.

 

  • Author: PennedAI (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 12th, 2025 10:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: Would really like to see if anyone gets it😊 drop down ur interpretations
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Not on the menstrual cycle was it? A real nail biter you got there.

    • Abdullah123

      umm that didn't cross my mind😭

      It was supposed to be about doubt, suspicion and trauma, but now that u point it out😅

      • sorenbarrett

        It is always amazing to me how people see different things in my poem than I the writer had in mind.

        • Abdullah123

          Couldn't have said it better, and perhaps that's the beauty of poetry: how what one might see as trauma, can be interpreted as menstruation😂
          thank u for your insights

          • sorenbarrett

            Most welcome



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