I Felt It

jjudaharts

The chaos of my mind died,

When my bare feet touched the green grass,

Though the sun was scorching hot,

Resting under my shadow was a hard red beetle,

Tough on the outside yet vulnerable when I touched it.

 

How could I forget the lulling feel of the soft leaves,

The rich brownness of the hard trees,

Serenity in the thin air,

The blue sky and its milk-white clouds,

And the sweet smell of the vibrant orchids?

 

Nature's got a paradise to it,

Only those one with it feel it.

 

I felt it.

  • Author: jjudaharts (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 13th, 2025 10:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: This piece expresses my experience with nature and my love for it.It is God's creation for man to dwell with it and cherish it.Beyond its life is paradise that no words describe.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • sorenbarrett

    I feel it and am in it at the moment. This poem caught me in that moment and as rarely happens the two coincided leaving me with a feeling of bliss. That deserves a fave.

    • jjudaharts

      thank you so much. I am glad you are touched by the poem

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome



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