I cry for justice
But escape the situations obstructing my own
So is it really justice
If I left a little one behind in the same unjust situation?
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Wonderfully written here. This is definitely one that is worth the read. I like how you’ve ended it with such notice as with a question, which you stated “If I left a little one behind in the same unjust situation?” Great question dear, we may not know the answer, yet what would you say is justice to you, although mainly and deeply this is much so about justice entirely.
Overall nicely done here 🥂✨👏🏻
It's interesting how justice is defined differently. Thank you for reading.
Of course dearest 🥂, that is definitely a fun fact.
A poetic question that asks one to step outside themselves and judge one's own behaviors on the same scale that one judges others. A most lovely write of introspection. Nicely done
Thank you for reading!
You are most welcome
🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just lingers. Justice, guilt, escape—all folded into a single haunting reflection. Brilliant minimalism, my friend. You did what you had to do and such things are out of your control. Your cry for justice, no doubt (as evidenced by this introspective and empathetic poem), is for your little brother too. I pray for justice for you too, my friend. For both of you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you
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