me and the rain

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

It would be poetic, wouldn't it?

To bleed out in the rain

Blood falling like droplets

Mixing with the dirty rain water

And reminding me of my uncleanliness.

 

It would be beautiful, right?

To connect with the young me

Who would have danced in the rain

And laughed--it would be lovely to do

The same and smile as I lay down to rest.

 

It would be magical, don't you think?

To cry like the rain

And slowly lose my vision

As I get so tired and comfortable

Following little me to the other side.

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 14th, 2025 09:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: It would be devastating though, for the ones who believed in me and had my back...even if it is such a small number.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 41
  • Users favorite of this poem: RSM0812, jjudaharts
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  • sorenbarrett

    Always easier to give up but not always better. A heartfelt poem of joining nature and leaving this shell behind. Sad and dark in a light way. Nicely done

    • NinjaGirl

      Thank you for reading!

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • RSM0812

        This envokes an unwelcome sadness like being caught in a storm and the rain are your tears. Seeiously, nicely done.

        • NinjaGirl

          Thank you...I write what I feel and I feel what I write!

        • rebellion_in_sanity

          An excellent poem!

          • NinjaGirl

            Thank you!



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