When you wish upon a star

hzugman

Our hopes and dreams

It often seems

Disappoint me and you

Just by coming true

  • Author: hzugman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 17th, 2025 17:43
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
  • Users favorite of this poem: jarcher54, jjudaharts
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  • sorenbarrett

    A nice twist in the expected in this poem. This is a fun read and well done.

  • hzugman

    Thanx again, SB.

  • jarcher54

    As wise as it is witty,
    This silly little ditty
    Despite my expectation
    Cements your reputation.

    • hzugman

      Thanx J54



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