They came and went
Some heaven sent
Some still hell bent
On fun
They brought some hope
An ounce of dope
A noosed up rope
And gun
They won't be told
Or let me fold
Come straight in cold
To stun
The whole world shook
Nostalgia took
A last look
At the sun
It's black as coal
My heart and soul
Pick at each hole
As one
I've loads to say
Will find a way
But for today
I'm done
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Author:
peto (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Struggling but trying to write and stay involved
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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Comments1
I'll give you a fave for the structure of this poem and its rhyme scheme that tickles the tongue as it rolls off it. Well done
Many thanks soren
Truly appreciate the kind words and encouragement
You are most welcome
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