Nanga Parbat

Lorenz

I entrust my dreams to the sacred mountains.

Waiting to the beautiful lady to come

and collect them ...

 The snow will cover me with a soft shroud

like a widow's dress...

And in the dead man's room ,

performed, will be the wedding sacrifice...

The silent witnesses,passing by ,

contemplating the frozen breath 

of my last prayer ...

  From your dark bowels 

I would be reborn to the quietness

of my green valleys ...

 The melancholic horn 

 gathering the herd ...

 Returning from our hard work,

mother will serve us creamy soup .

 And father will rejoice ! Saying :

'' The harvest looks promising ! ''

Father isn't  talkative ...

 Countryman of few words .

  He's just a conqueror of the everyday life...

 I aspire to the eights 

that guards the bodies .

Only the earth does not lie 

 but it is not my story ...

  You, summits only loving  iced virgins

and chanting  Buddha's mantras

who places  impermanence upon 

 the wounds of the soul ...

  Even  reduced to the state of a statue,

spectral shape,confused with the rock ,

Nanga Parbat you will not be 

master of my madness ! 

You who break the  course of the clouds,

I will engrave my rebellion 

into the last few meters of your flesh !

Message that destiny will read 

with a lethal smile .

  Mountain take me !

I know that desiring you is a sacrilege !

 I will enjoyed your disembodied charms ,

   your unfathomable chasm ...

  And the crowd will not greet me .

  calling  me a stroller ...

'' You think you've  won ! 

But you have only raised your pettiness

with  some impertinence !

  And once again the plains beckons you...''

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 18th, 2025 10:47
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again

  • Priya Tomar

    Well woven poem.
    Tragic heroism !
    " Father's just conqueror of everyday life " .

    • Lorenz

      Sublime conquest of the useless !

    • Ellen Marsell

      Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.

      • Lorenz

        Mirror of human excess and transcendence !

      • sorenbarrett

        A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave

        • Lorenz

          The earth doesn't lie but man doesn't understand it !

          • sorenbarrett

            Man never understands the earth's language.



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