always an option, never the choice
always an option, never the choice
always an option, never the choice
Always the poet never the poem
Always the poet never the poem
Always the poet never the poem
Always the dreamer, never the dream
Always the dreamer, never the dream
Always the dreamer, never the dream
Always the great, never the first
Always the great, never the first
Always the great, never the first
Always the spark, never the flame,
Always the spark, never the flame,
Always the spark, never the flame,
Always a part, never the lead
Always a part, never the lead
Always a part, never the lead
Always existing, never alive
Always existing, never alive
Always existing, never alive
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Know the feeling
Always the poison never the cure
Really like how you got this message across
Thanks for sharing
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Feeling a part but not the whole is not necessarily a bad thing for we are all parts of something greater with an illusion of independence. The form of this poem is intriguing in the triple repetition of each line. Nicely worded and constructed building of the previous lines it culminates in the difference between existing and living. Well done
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I suppose it works both ways.
The ones out in front sometimes have to force themselves to perform.
The introvert in a way is usually the writer, the producer, part of the ingredient to success.
true
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