The rain reminded me
Of pigtails crying
Intertwined
Within the wind
The clouded sky
Cramped with gray
An angry face
A dismal day.
Red bricks soaked
Windows tainted
Battered doors
Paint flaking
Passing cars
Throwing spray
Upon the walking
A violent day.
Autumns kiss
Lips to press
Upon the wishful
Thoughts suppress
Another season
One more year
Since you left
An angered tear.
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Author:
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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Comments2
Set on a tearful day, sky's face of grey it can not help but be melancholy. The metaphor is nicely painted and the ending foreshadowed. Well done
thanking you
You are welcome
A seasonal urban atmosphere that makes you long for the hereafter !
thanks for reading
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