We rise up together when the hard times almost tear us apart
But you couldn't believe the strength that I can share with you
We look after each other when no one wants to be our side
But you believe on people who never stood up for you
We hold our hands together when no one wants to defend us
But you gave a chance for people who never truly love you
We broke our hearts when we almost give up on us
But you couldn't choose me as a partner to deserve you
Because your different world couldn't be the love life of my destiny
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Author:
Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer (
Offline) - Published: October 28th, 2025 09:35
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
This one sounds familiar to me is it edited or republished? A good write it speaks back to one that does not want such love or will not accept it. Well written.
Hi, Sorenbarrett.
I edited only the arrangement of the poem. Thank you for asking and commenting my poem. Really appreciate it.
You are most welcome
Sometimes It's just not to be, and no matter how much you try, it can't be fixed.
We can't expect love to be the standards that we want. We expect the best but the perfection sometimes make us blind to see the real love. It's not our fault to fall for the wrong person. We just don't know when we can meet someone who can love us so we don't have to beg anyone to stay.
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