My soft deer,
I can't truly veer,
I am lost,
And this love will cost.
Im scared to commit,
Afraid it'll quit,
I sabotaged what was built,
And I feel like Im left with guilt.
Not the best at making decisions,
Altered futures messing my visions,
Im sorry, I broke your heart,
Fragile and weak, I shattered art.
Your Perception changed,
Can't reverse what's been deranged,
I question what was true,
It's all blue.
Am I a traitor,
Lost in emotions saving for later,
Called it a distraction,
But did I lack direction?
Completely shut out,
Deserved and thrown flout,
I care about the moon,
Scarred my precious dune.
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Author:
Cirawrites01 (
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Comments1
I see a deer in the road from which one can not veer away or avoid. Sad indeed. Nicely written as a metaphor for a relationship as well.
Yes it was a relationship....
Honestly you have good insights from reading poems, that's so cool frr
You are most welcome
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