The simple song
My heart contained,
In loving you
Forever changed.
Multitudes flow
Fast and far,
An orchestra,
A lone guitar.
To hear you laugh,
To see you smile,
No matter if
A world, a mile.
A feeling I cannot control;
You are the music of my soul.
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Comments2
A love poem set in short lines and good rhyme. Nicely done as simple as the love it expresses.
Lovely write
Sounds like you're fallen but with obstacles
The ",fast and far" and
"A world a mile" lines gave it a distant feel
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