"Do you know why a shake keeps moving?"
They've got to keep moving or they'll die
Gasping for breath under the endless sky
With each step, their hearts beat in time
YIPPEE!!!!!!!!, they shout, feeling alive.
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Author:
Keyara S Trotman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Here goes another for you all to comment and more đĨâ¤ī¸ Signed ~ pyt kiki
- Category: Short story
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments2
Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
Dearest Soren much appreciated â¤ī¸đĨ for your read and comment, and your insights definitely needed
Most welcome
Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay alive. You put that instinct into rhythm beautifully. đšđ¤đđ¯ī¸đĻââŦ
Dearest Tristan, I appreciate your time, taking the time to read and comment on my written piece, much appreciated and much helpful feedback , dearest Tristan of course you are welcomed â¤ī¸đĨ
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