I felt you slipping away
in the silence between our words,
where laughter used to linger
like light on morning glass.
Your eyes still met mine,
but only out of habit,
a ghost of love rehearsing
what it used to mean.
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OA Poetry (
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Comments6
Laughter between words, replaced by silence. Intuition expressed cleverly. Nice one!
slay
You know itπ«‘
This poem has such a familiar feel to it. It seems that I have read it before and that its words feel like home. Nicely done
Iβm glad you enjoyed it π
Good write, OA. Enjoyed the read.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read π
tender, touching, and beautiful - inspired.
A lovely write, few words, loads of meaning.
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